OPENING ACTIVITY:Because it has been four days since we have worked with our personal essays, I want to provide you with some time to work on your personal essays.
Your choices:
1. Continue typing your draft if you aren't finished. (Google Doc: Personal Essay 2013 email address) 2. Continue working on your Revision Activity from Wednesday. (Google Doc: FirstName's Revision for Detail Activity) 3. Read over your finished draft and make tiny revisions here and there. |
OBJECTIVES:
- Students will revise their personal essay to add detail about the setting.
- Students will revise their personal essay to clarify the conflict
INSTRUCTION: Setting and Conflict
TEACHER MODEL:
Watch me revise this piece from Jack Gantos. You will be doing the same thing with your personal essay.
YOUR TURN:
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